I,
A horse,
Awaiting
Her brave rider.
I am not choosy
Neither am I easy.
The rider’s will matters here.
I won’t be conquered by the weak.
My language is persistence and strength.
Control your mind, believe in you, you’ll win.
Lake of bright fire
Beside, blue green river flows
Battle of equals
He
Falters,
A deep breath,
Remounts, tenth time.
I struggle, he too.
I won’t give in to him,
He will not give in to me.
I, strongbodied, he, strongminded
Two of a kind battle in the wild.
In the end, the mind wins over body.
Fiery flames burn red
Swishing, swashing river runs
Win or lose, one will
He
Falters,
A deep sigh,
Won’t climb again.
He retreats fuming,
Blaming all but himself.
Prancing and roaming the wild,
I await a brave heart again.
While he tells them he was unlucky.
Luck is not a language I understand.
Water Fire war
One with greatest force will win
Lady luck then smiles
©Aweni
Image credit- deviantart
This three step Haibun – Etheree combination is in response to Colleen’s weekly Tanka Tuesday poetry challenge
The prompt for this week’s challenge is poet’s choice of words.
Fortune favours the brave.
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Exactly😀. May we always find the strength to be brave when we need it the most.
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Fabulous stealth mode submission! LOL! ❤
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😊😊😊thank you Colleen😚😚😚
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Thank you Colleen❤
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Love this. I was rooting for the horse throughout!
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Really?!😃😃😃😃
The horse can hold its own.
Interesting.
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I’m all for backing winners😊
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Gorgeous and brilliant collection of poems here! Wow! 😀
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Thank you Vashti😀😀😀😀😚
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Wow, this is an incredible poem, Aweni.
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